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Disclaimer: This is my first Friday Fictioneer, I think I did it right, if not, I do so apologize! ^,^
Word Count: 100
Genre: Fiction
A stormy night in the midst of the war between human, machine, and human. Running~
Known as peace chasers, taking no sides, the only two who remained. We had outrun the machines, The humans were gaining. Close enough to hear their hearts beating, Far enough to have a snowball’s chance in hell.
Just ahead, a dilapidated house promised refuge. IF we successfully gained a skosh more ground.
We paused just long enough for Rai to pull back a heavy bough, upon release, our enemies lost enough ground.
Reaching the ruin, “Jump!” she took my hand a pulled the cord as we descended, flushed to safety.
Dear D.O.S.
Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Your story is full of action. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Yay! Thanks Rochelle 😀
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gahhhh why is the picture there twice now….
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A tenuously tantalising link it is. Bur action packed with a smile at the end. A Good read thank you.
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THank you so much! 😀 I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Hey, welcome to FF. You have indeed done it right. Your story is chock full of action, kept me on the edge of my seat. The ending was cute. Welcome aboard, parachute ‘n’ all.
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Thank you! it was hard, but fun… I am wondering, though, what happens next XD 😀
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More fun when you read others’ stories and their comments and comment yourself. Despite our writerly idiosyncrasies we are a supportive group at least we try to be. 😉
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lol yep! I am working on this very thing as we speak. I love the little bite sized stories.
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Welcome to Friday Fictioneers
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Thank you muchly!!!!
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That was action packed! I liked the last line.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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THank you muchly I am glad you enjoyed it, SO far I am LOVING this FF thing!
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Yes, Welcome DOS! What a great thriller you’ve taken us to!
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Thank you! it was mighty fun! I imagine it only gets better, I am enjoying reading other’s stories as well!
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It is addictive and made greater by reciprocation.
Do come back next week!
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Being flushed to safety… had to smile at that unexpected end.
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I aim to please lol 😀 glad you endjoyed it 😀
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Lol, your brain works a lot like mine…Good 1st one. Hoping to read more!
Scott
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Glad you are here D.O.S. Enjoyed your story and I like the way you think! Merry Christmas!
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