* Holy eff it’s already friday, I didn’t realize it until just now. at 8:30 pm.. Hope you enjoy.*
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Word Count: 100
Miles and miles,
we drove.
We had packed our car,
we were gone.
Days and days,
we talked.
We discussed our Future,
we were free.
Hours and hours
we sat in silence.
We had argued,
we would heal.
Weeks and weeks,
we finally stopped.
A small town,
called winter.
Years and years,
Kept Enslaved.
We found Solace,
In the snow.
Hours and hours,
we walked.
He lost his footing,
my hand slipped.
Miles and miles,
Ice and snow.
Our wedding night
would be without a groom.
A sign on a tree,
reads:
“Here lies Sommer,
Lost in winter.”
Oh my God. I’m now imagining Sommer taking a rebirth and coming back to complete his journey with her.
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that would be a lovely ending… 😀
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That was beautifully done. Thank you.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Dear Sin,
So much for the honeymoon. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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yes, the honeymoon will be lacking XD. I bet they paid a pretty penny for it too.
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Outstanding, and a really good rhythm to it.
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Thanks 😀
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I liked the way you used “Days and days,” “Hours and hours,” “Miles and miles,” etc. It reminded me of the rhythm of life, and the loss at the end, reminded me of the fragility of life. Very nicely done!
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Why thank you ^,^
I enjoy reading everyone’s POV’s(on both the prompt and my writing) ^,^ Happy Wednesday!
♡Sin
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I enjoyed the read and the story…plot was excellent.
Scott
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Why thank You, kind sir. ^,^
I hope to keep you entertained ^,^
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Excellent, especially liked the closing lines.
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Well, finally got mine done. As I said before, yours was gerat!
Scott
Mine: https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2017/12/11/fall-of-our-discontent/
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I loved the rhythm of this and was beautifully done!
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Thank You! ^,^
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